If you read the first essay posted on this blog then I'm sure you're delighted, and not so surprised, to hear that my English teacher had me rewrite it. These are his comments.
Alex–the prompt asks for an essay. This is some hybrid of an essay and an apology letter, which was NOT the prompt. *rewrite due tomorrow or -25 points.
This is how I interpreted it:
Alex–the prompt asks for five-paragraphs, typed, double-spaced, MLA Format. This is not an essay. It is way more than five paragraphs. It does not have a proper heading. It addresses the audience directly. It ends with a valediction. This is NOT acceptable. How dare you try to do something different. Stick with what everyone else is doing. Don't try to be creative. *rewrite due tomorrow or -25 points (because that's the worst thing I can do to you)
The first thing I did was laugh. The very nature of my previous essay was unacceptability. This forced rewrite proved it was a success.
The second thing I did was look up the word essay. Apparently, an essay is any literary composition about a certain topic. So, even though it was disguised as, formatted as, a letter, my brain child was actually an essay.
The third thing I did, of course, was write my
rewrite.
PS I have a 79.9% in this class. Haha.